Developing Ideas- Day 16

In todays lesson we stared off by looking at the ending of the gate scene while Ashley's scene which we had now decided didn't have Dom in. While everyone else was doing this I worked on what was going to be said on the video to 'relax' us before the 7 devils piece.

Once we had worked on these 2 scenes we went on to running from the beginning off what we had so far to see if we could change anything and make it better. When doing this we realised that how Dan and Freya were acting as Doctor and Nurse was making it comical and this was taking away from the eere affect that we wanted so we needed to make are that they took it more serious and tried not to bounce off of each other to much. We also had comments on Carl's movement scene making sure that we are all in the right places and we had to changed the beginning slightly because we didn't have a TV and we needed him to be introduced in order for Dom and the audience to know what was wrong with him.